All Comments on 'David Writes an Erotic Story'

Wish that was me fucking her

Nice short story. Well paced with good descriptions.

Write more!

I liked that you put a realistic touch to your story and rejected all the badly written stories here. To many eleven inch cocks being deep throated and zero gag response. Juvenile porn at its worst.

I am into mom-son genre, and i seldom read stories that are coming from the mother's point of view. But i am glad i read your story, as it is so well written! It certainly changed my mind to read more of such. Pls keep writing!

Beautiful story well written.

Thanks for sharing.

Looking forward to your next one.

David becomes a successful writer of Erotic novels for women. He will thank his mother often with his big Fat cock. As his father ages, and his sex drive slows down, David must sexually please his Mother's libido, and pussy. Another chapter would be appreciated.

A very nice take on the 'mom reads son's story' genre. You did this well. Thanks.

Good or bad, she bent over for him. 😈😈😈😜

I loved the story and it was so nice that Mom had no problem fucking her son and helping him with his writing

I loved the story and more.

What a wonderful story and such a surprise from the title as his mother helped him in more ways than one. Great writing. BRAVO !!! JEF

I had to stop reading when Mom said he was writing "porn" like an inexperienced teen and all women, like her, gag and can't stand the taste of cum. She wasn't that experience herself. Stories here are more fantasy than reality. 2*

Fucking hot awesome got me hard as a rock reto cum

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. A shame I missed it when it was new. 5 Stars