All Comments on '"Dawn" of a New Era for an Author'

Lovely story. Thank you very much.

That was smoking hot and beautifully written. Love your writing and characters. Thank you for sharing them with us.

I'm impressed. Despite a few typos, this is an extraordinary story of romance rivaled only by the undercurrent of a 'Mature' theme. I'm pleased to have stumbled on it as I seldom read the romance category. You have a lovely way of expressing yourself and the story held my attention through the end. (For every one I read, I probably close twenty, so I hope that gives you some insight.) Well done, and then some, Mr. Gray.

Such a fun frolicsome read for this happily married 70 yr old Annapolis Man, Class of '71 & Naval Retiree.

WS

Piece of writing and a very engaging story, thanks

This is the first of your stories I have read. I stumbled across it doing a search. However now that I have added you as one of my favorite authors I will be playing catch-up. It has a lot of similarities to my real life story. But my nurse was only 17yrs. my junior and red headed. Anyway 5++ stars.

P.S. I don’t know why but I kept expecting there to be some type of friendship(high school classmates, roommates, etc.) between Dawn and “Nancy”.

Love a light-hearted romp! :+))

I smiled all the way thru this delightful story. I like feel good sometimes, but sometimes I like stories with a little bit of bite and angst. I will give this a top rating because it deserves it.

detroitdave

This is the first of your stories that I have read; holy shit, great job. It will not be the last.

Thanks for sharing. My best to Dawn.

A very entertaining story with a great ending. Leaving, possibilities open for future romantic adventures. I relate to the timeline as I was 14 when Nancy released her hit song. My wife was particularly taken with Nancy & Lee and their song "Some Velvet Morning". While happily married, from time to time I notice and attractive mature women in the supermarket or plant & garden stores and I'm tempted to follow them, but as you stated: "common sense prevails". I am a happy endings type of guy, so I like all your stories.

that all of us 'old farts' have. Especially me. Great story. Thanks.

Just.shy of 60, now feeling like 20. Such a delightful story. My wife fulfills my dreams but story's like this help us keep it young and fresh. Thanks for the inspiration!

Your eloquence and imagination are truly energizing.

DP

Even to warn the heart of any old fart. Favourited story 5*.

Absolutely brilliant! I wish that I could write half as well.

This is a clever storey. It has a bit of a feeling of those stories with multiple outcomes where the reader makes decisions about outcomes.

really great wish you were still writing

Even after many reads, and knowing what 60+yrs brings, the dreams are great! Wish there could be an update, chapter 2, or epilogue.

First I love all your stories. Please create more I've read through all you've written to date and can't get enough. I don't usually comment but I felt I needed to in your case. Keep up the good work. A loyal fan.

I'm extremely jealous, I wish I could write like you . Thank you yet again.

Any newer stories? Missing new stories and chapters. Please?