All Comments on 'Dawn's Innocence'

Easily higher than five stars. Thank you I love this series, you are truly a talented writer

I have read them all and i love them all. Now waiting for the next book :) Is Torr the next one or is it Carter? Whoever it is, I'll be watching for a new one.

DracosBaby

The spelling and grammar is rough, there is too much repetition in the characters' actions, personalities & views on life, love and relationships. One such repetitive action is indicative of what I mean: '...he/she hook their fingers through his/her belt loops...".

Not everyone does this, just like not every is a love/relationship/committment phobe.

People are as different in their actions, personalities & life/love perspectives, as there are types of trees, flowers or animals. To shape your to be all the same makes them all one dimensional.

And fer gawds sake, it's 'brute', not 'bruit', lol...

A good tale, worth reading, but needs the touch of an experienced pro to make it the gem it has the potential to be.

GeoD