All Comments on 'Daybreak'

Kind of psychological - you're in the main character's mind which is nice compared to some of the wham bam thank you maam writing we see here.More!

This isn't fair. I had to go see a psychiatrist and pay as well.. None of my so-called self-proclaimed friends ever offered up some free soothing therapy, but then again I never did pass out from the bloody valiums those quacks gave me - said tabletts couldn't give a buzz to a hamster. I eventually flushed about 20 pills down the toilet in the throes of blood thinning anger and dangerous frustration (never again!) Hacks. Anyway, thanks for the story. Both of them actually. Just a thought: can't she blackmail both boys into a 3-way now? I mean, Neill did start the party with a rape and Mikey-the-slut is married. Shot again for story.

Hope to see more.

kept waiting for dude's wife to walk in LOL

don't know what you authors call it I mean the details and such you know the texture or grittiness. really makes me feel like I'm there bc I can sure see that gal's face. read all your stories so you need to get writing! coiuld use more character developement you know back story abouit them. THANKS!! 5+++++

You really are good, KJ! I get the feeling that all of your stories are autobiographical to some extent. Am I right? More please!