All Comments on 'DD: New Rome University Vol. 01'

Well, SirCiroc, this is pretty good for a first submission. Please keep going. Your narrative was a bit choppy, and there were a few grammar errors: missing words, etc. (e.g. a "no" that should have been a "not"). You can't trust only the spell checker. Try to get someone else to proofread your stories before you submit them. (I'm volunteering.)

As to the story itself, you've got me thinking back to a 60's novel called The Harrad Experiment, which was made into a film in the 70's. At Harrad College the students were randomly assigned coed roommates, for starters. Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading examples of how your New Rome teachers use wardrobe assignments as punishment/rewards. That has me intrigued.

Keep the chapters coming. Enjoyed it very much. Chris