All Comments on 'Deadly Waters Pt. 07'

Another exciting chapter!

5

Simply marvelous. I'm waiting each day for the next installment.

Bravo. Please check “sight” for site. Otherwise first rate cooy editing.

Thanks.

Speaking of copy editing….

sorry.

Developing quite nicely - good character development, well-paced, excellent use of suspense and conflict. 5 Star work, indeed.

Sounds like our author is pretty familiar with police work, experience or just good research? Stories moving right along, well written.

This is great and getting even beter as the story moves along. I am sure you will shortly be in high demand for the movie rights. Have you decided who will play Sean?

Plod plod plod. Nice steady police work, but it's frustrating the hell out of me that one really obvious evidence thread, with already available data, has being ignored ever since the possible motive was established, and one not so obvious, but currently able to be collected bit of evidence, that would narrow down where the illegal dumping is taking place, is about to get given back. Aaaaaaarrrrrrgggghhhhh!

More please.

Fantastic. I’m in the middle of reading a suspense novel from a NYT best-selling author, and keep putting it down to read this instead.

{Have you decided who will play Sean?}

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I hadn't until you asked the question. On a lark, I gave it some thought.

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Sean > Josh Lucas

Maggie > Michelle Monaghan

Steve > Clancy Brown

Rudy > Bruce McGill

Just keep at it, it’s a lot of fun so far, even if Sean does seem to miss a couple of things he shouldn’t. of course, we’ll find out shortly…

*****Good chapter. Thanks for sharing.