All Comments on 'Deal or No Deal Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very nice first story...

Well-paced with good details. Looking forward to Chapter 2 and beyond!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Very enjoyable .

Nothing overly exagerated , a good change from most .

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 15 years ago
Enjoyed it

A good start to what promises to be an interesting series. Keep it up!

markvwalkermarkvwalkerover 15 years ago
Nice beginning

I look forward to the next part of this story.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
I hope that the little girl can really win out

I don't know what she has in mind, but I hope she takes the blackmailing asshole for everything he has. Good story. Rich

TwoHOTFORU69TwoHOTFORU69over 15 years ago
Forever more.

Looks like it will be forever more for these two and can't wait to read chapter two. Thanks. JAG/TSO

OneIBlindOneIBlindover 15 years ago
More....

Good start, I'm looking foward to seeing what the plan is!

kuffsnkeyskuffsnkeysabout 15 years ago
Very nice.

Although incest/taboo is not my thing, it was a very well writen story nonetheless. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

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