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All Comments on 'Deal With My Minions'

by The_Muse_of_Doom

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haltwhogoestherehaltwhogoesthereabout 2 years ago

Quit 10 paragraphs in. What a rambly, fragmented mess, too much work to keep up with.

MaonaighMaonaighabout 2 years ago

What an unpleasant crowd. For a reader to really enjoy a story, they should be able to like---or at least empathise with---at least one character. I couldn't feel anything other than distaste for this lot.

rorr82rorr82about 2 years ago

I had no idea what the point of this story was. It wasn't very well described the point of doing the 3 girls or how that would make a person stop being bi n become solely lesbian? Very confusing n to too it off it wasnt even a turn on to read about the sexual actions taking place. 1 star

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Never have I ever gotten feedback where I was like... no thanks! Fun Fact: When hermit crabs find items suitable for homes, they pick them up and roll them around before making the switcheroo! They can examine these shells/containers/nests for, in human time, "longer than nee...