All Comments on 'Dealmaker'

Great story on it's own! Is it wishful thinking to hope that it's a start to a longer story perhaps?! Well written...bonus was that there were no annoying interruptions due to glaring grammatical & spelling errors!

Hope you are inspired to write more on Claire's adventure with her 3 Demons!

K.Veracious

I so much wanted to see an indication of a 2nd or 3rd page... Please don't stop here!

Fabulous story, would love to read more......

great beginning tired of the whinning victims.

I love it so far. I look forward to reading more.

Amazing start. Looking forward to more chapters. Great stand alone story as well. But why stop there when it has so much potential as a series. =]

Ive read everything you've wrote so far and I think you're amazing!!! :) please keep writing.

Good one. Would really like to see more of this one, please!

This sounds like a promising story....hopefully longer chapters?

nice writing

Such an intriguing beginning. I can't wait for more!

I really enjoy your writing, I hope you continue this story it is very intruiging. Please post again soon.

is there more or is this it ? if this is it - whats the point ?

Okay, I think I've finally fixed this. Understandably, I've recieved uite a few emails asking about the correct list of the 'Dealmaker" chapters. I apologize for not numbering the titles. That's my stupid maistake. I've put the correct list in the 'Biography' section of my profile if you get lost, but just in case, I'll post it here as well.

1. Dealmaker

2. Helldancer

3. Firekeeper

4. Soulseeker

5. Secretkeeper

6. Havencaller

7. Shadowrunner

8. Demonbreaker

9. Boneshaker

10. Gravedancer

Hope this helps. Sorry about that, everyone!

Nicely done. No worries abt sequencing...I just follow the dates :)

I've been wondering what the name of this was for the longest time! I read it a while back and forgot to bookmark it and I'm so glad I've found it again!

Clearwater is WEST of Tampa--on the other side of Tampa Bay.

Thought the bit about satinists was off from their beliefs this story has an amazing change of perspective from the norm loved it.