All Comments on 'Dean and the Dryad Pt. 04'

by brownbeauty

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Ummmmmm.......

Fuuuuuuuuuuuuq, THAT WAS HOT!

shewhogiveslifeshewhogiveslifeover 8 years ago
Amazing....

as usual! I'm loving the pace, and must say I thoroughly enjoy the longer chapters. The more I learn about each of these characters, the deeper I fall in love with all of them. It's easing the heartbreak I've been suffering from since having to part with Kendra and Keith <3

The only criticism I have to offer is that Zena's name keeps changing to Deena. This happened in the last chapter too, and every time it does, it takes me out of the story.

Regardless, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next chapter, and look forward to delving deeper into this wonderful world you've set up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
welp!!!

Just............DAAAAMN!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Interesting story.

A good editor would help with the errors that marred a good chapter.

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Hot

Loved it! Sex was super hot right until the end, although I was surprised you ended it as you did.

Zena wasn't "Deena" unless you meant to foreshadow Zena having a baby with Dean and naming it "Deena." ;)

Glad her secret is out, but now...what are your plans for more? I hope to read more soon. 5

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