All Comments on 'Deanna's Surprise Pt. 01'

THIS IS BY FAR THE BEST WORK I'VE SEEN IN A LONG TIME. 6 PAGES YET THEY HAD ME SO INTRIGUIED! THE GRAMMAR WAS EXCELLENT, WHICH IS AN UNFORTUNATE RARITY. I AM ANXIOUS FOR THE CONTINUATION(S) OF THE DEANNA SERIES. I WANT TO WITNESS THE CONFRONTATION OF MARLENNA AND DEANNA, AS WELL AS THE SISTER STRIP SHOW. YOU HAVE FOUND A FAN. WHEN YOUR FIRST NOVEL IS PUBLISHED, I WILL PURCHASE IT AT MY EARLIEST AWARENESS. GREAT JOB. THANKS!

nicly done i love ur stories

Cant wait to find out what happens next.

6 pages and I couldn't put it down the whole time. Can't wait to see what's coming .Thank you so much.

This was fabulous! The writing, the emotion, and switching viewpoints was done effortlessly!