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by arbenitre

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Anonymousabout 5 years ago

Needs edit

I enjoyed what you have to say but you honestly rambled a lot. You need to make a copy of this and highlight the actual activities of the day and not just the generalities of her attitude. Rewrite the separation. I appreciated her attitude and her style (and yours) but they needed to be in a separate article or at least a separate section of this article from the activities