All Comments on 'Dear Diary'

.........but the whole tightness thing was way overdone. The storyline is hardly a new one but you were doing fairly well in the beginning.

Just a quick reminder that only about 5% of a cumshot is from the balls so that part was overdone too.

"It was face down, and the name Crystal was across the cover..."

If it was face down, how could he see the name? Names are usually written on the face of diaries, not in the back.

Man, you keep topping your previous effort. I loved the pace of this story and how they teased each other, not jumping immediately into fucking. Great story MDM!

Too many typos. A re-read would have got most of those. I do agree with the comment about the tightness thing being overdone, but for a different reason. She's been using a six-inch or bigger dildo frequently, so she shouldn't be all that tight.

The presentation of the mutual seduction was pretty good. I gave it a 5 because a 4.5 isn't an option. but eliminate those typos!

Quit with the frothy cum,

Frothy cum?

I loved the premise. The sex was fucking hot! There were a few mistakes but nothing a good editor or proofreader couldn't catch. Five stars and a favorite point!

Please remember; those that can, do. Those that can’t, leave anonymous comments whining about insignificant things. Great writing!!

as expected another great read. still room for more chapters. please continue.

Another fantastic tale!!!! Yes there were a few errors but they didn't take away from the story!!!! All these haters just hate because they can't match your level of art!!!! This was a beautiful tale of love, true love!!!! Love is hard to find in this hateful world!!!

Fuck those babies into her Daddy

The pregnancy bit isn't really my kink, but went well in this case. Every story I read has something I would have done different, but that's why I enjoy reading other's works. I'm a horrible writer, you are an excellent writer. I read and enjoy, only casting aspersions on really bad writing. Thanks, AJ

I love this story, but why preggers? I know... I know... no one is forcing me to read this.

Your stories are hot.

Exactly what walkstrongbear said. I couldn’t put it better. Thank you. Five stars - more if they were available.

Awesome writing and story, as usual!

Please keep writing more...i wish I had a daddy like crystals

another 5 stars but please use a proofreader. Silly little mistakes spoil the flow

One of the Hottest stories I ever read as this Daddy wants a Hottie like Crystal as that was So Intense on multiple levels

Was really a great story until it became too saccharine with all the rings and pregnancy shit . . . .

"Dear Diary:" - Nineteen Year Nubile Daughter, Crystal and Forty Year Old Long-divorced Father, Unnamed.

Writer/author 'MountainDewMan'--(as of this posting 22 April 2024--has authored one hundred five (105) stories; there have been several stories that I read many years ago. Within the past few days I've read two (2) his stories that have blown my mind of acceptance: 'Babies 101' a few days ago, and 'Dear Diary' that I've just finished. As a precursor, I'm an avid fan of incest/taboo genre stories where actual and/or probable/possible love, romance, respect of the female, and an appreciation of the best and honest incest imaginable. Any reader's seeking incest/taboo writings, MUST read the two (2) previous recommendations of pregnancy/impregnation. Both stories are endeared with those criteria...personified!! Both stories are a pure pleasure to read, where there is minimal literary writing errors; there are a couple alphabetical letters out of several words, or a couple small words missing--but nothing that detracts from the tenor and tone of the story or the dialogue or roles of the characters. Both 'Babies 01' (posted September 11 2020) and 'Dear Diary' (posted March 11 2020) are highly recommended. The year 2020 seems to have been a very good year in the literary mind of this prolific and profound writer!!!

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