by subKaren92
Sweet story, with everyone getting what they like, including me getting the HOT cunt MILF submissive, and her beautiful teen Mistress. EXCELLENT!!! Definitely hoping for a chapter 2!!
This is beautifully written and with an authenticity that is sadly lacking from other posts written by men. They should all read this and learn how it is done.
Excellent. You know how to get the juices flowing and keep them going.
One suggestion (from a writing nerd): in a couple of places you use the word "women" for what looks like should be "woman."
A friend recommended your work and I decided to start with Dear Diary. So far I’m loving this story of complete control. On to Chapter Two!!