All Comments on 'Dear Diary - Storm'

I thoroughly enjoyed this story, it had the perfect amounts of everything. I hope there will be more and that they end up together forever!

Lovely backstory really made the story emotional and real. Thanks.

Great story and syart to what should follow. Pls more on this.

Slow build up then fast and furious.

Just a perfect romance.

5 stars

I absolutely love this one and I hope you expand on it someday. Has all the witty style of your spiced by some real feels that make it even more unique. Thanks for writing this one!

Great story. How about chapter 2

That was a great little tale.

Only because of the mud. The remainder of the story smoked with hot sex. I think Ashley and Lucas will be getting together again and again.

So will there be a sequel? The kind of romance described in this story demands a conclusion. I'd like to read they married and spent their years making babies.

Not as much romance as it was erotic couplings, but the next chapter might fit this category better.

Barely an "Erotic Coupling" story. More the quiet guy and the slut. HOW??? does she EVER win his respect???

Hmmm... well-written but I’m not a fan of this one. It’s certainly not a romance story. He saves her in high school, she goes away to college and becomes promiscuous, then returns for the summer and gives the hired help a tumble and maybe an STD. Then she’ll leave and go back to school to go through the rest of the male student body. I don’t see anything meaningful about this story. She may as well have screwed the guy at the gas station for all the emotion she shows beyond horniness. I didn’t see any foreshadowing of a desire for a future relationship beyond her plans to have breakfast with him.

How is this romance!! He works his ass off!!

She becomes a skank after him for sex!!

We all need a hero at times!

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