All Comments on 'Death By Orgasm'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
little spelling mistake

Story was quite good, but being stuck in a runt is when she's small and you can't get out. Try 'rut' instead. That kind of error takes one out of the story.

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