by KeithD
I wish it continued so I could learn more about the mystery And why people were being killed
Granted I didn't hit the reader over the head with a hammer labeled with "the young wife's boyfriend did it to get the young wife," but I don't think you have to be Agatha Christie to get that and to get that the mobster then bumped the boyfriend off for stealing the briefcase. What I didn't say is what's in the briefcase. It's got to be something valuable, though, right? I've let the reader decide that--or at least the ones who don't need to be hit over the head with a hammer to get it.
Loved the question of what was in it even though no one gave an answer. It added to the setting and kept me reading more. Great story. Loved the descriptions of the sex scenes.
I've read a couple of your stories here and on GayDemon, I really enjoy the diverse settings, and this is no exception. (You've done some traveling.) Kudos to a wonderful piece of writing as well as some very hot description!
Loved the mystery aspect of it, and no I don't need to be hit over the head with a hammer. Sex scenes were awesome as always.
Love when you do stories overseas, do you do a lot of traveling or just research??
ToSugarShark13: Thanks for the note. I spent a good third of my life living and traveling outside of the United States, yes. Lived in Cyprus for nearly a decade on different occasions and have a vacation villa not far from where this story is set--although I haven't been able to go there for several years. The harbor of Girne/Kyrenia is heaven on earth at night.