All Comments on 'Death of My Friend'

I liked the love making was personal not animal..

well done

Great story told in first person which is not easy. Allows you to envision exactly what she is feeling.

Good story! I gave you a four. You really had the feel of sex just after the loss of a loved one down pat. Afterward we might question if we are some unfeeling monster, but at the time, nothing can seem any 'righter'.

Well written and easy to read. It was unexpected how fast their "encounter" happened but grieving people tend to do unexpected things and it would be interesting to see where it goes. What are there relative ages?

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Cheers

Outstanding…

Loved it. It didn't hurt that I could relate to "3 and 21". Keep up the great work. 5 stars.