by tkoberon
It is a nicely written, bittersweet story. I have a bit of 'trouble', for lack of a better term, with how Daubi never spoke out about his innocence. Maybe, it is a cultural thing, (based on the reference to the Rowallan Camp, and after a quick DuckDuckGo search, I take it that this story is set in Kenya), but if I was falsely accused of impregnating a girl, I would be declaring my innocence, quite loudly. Even to the point of refusing to wed Beatrice. I am assuming DNA tests are not easily attainable. Other than that quibble, I found the story to be an enjoyable, though sad, read. Thank-you.
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Pasqual