by Ltirashin
really good story i liked the way that you where able to develop the characters as well as write a truly orgasmic story
To say that I'm amazed would be an obvious understatement. Honestly I don't know what to say, except that I enjoyed it, loved it... and ache for more as surely as this fantastic demoness ached for release during this ravishing tale.
It is truly rare to see such artistic brilliance combined with an interest in the sexual and demonic. I feel compelled to beg for more... MORE... MORE!!!
-A Fellow Dark Explorer of the Planes
Interesting story, with depths beyond the erotic. I like the inclusion of. The intrigue element between the succubus and her slave. I also like the ties this succubus has to her origin world, and her revenge motive.
You have excellent world building skills.