All Comments on 'Debbi, Daddy and The Roommate Ch. 01'

Loved the story but it was too short, could have included the girls discussing their plan for daddy rather than just going straight into things. Although I loved it, the sudden ending just spoilt it a little so only 4 stars.....will look out for next chapter

What a stupid place to stop

You could have described the 2 girls in detail as well as give a conversation between the girls as to the plan so the could seduce her dad

The title is the question.............

Finish the entire story before publishing!

Missing a lot of details and stopped in the wrong place. Very basic writing that desperately needs reworked