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by The_Doll_Keeper
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mitchawaalmost 3 years agoWell written. Good plot. Characters defined clearly, Great dialogue internally and externally. Engagement scene. perfectly done. Supper sex scene. My only problem is that everything went too smoothly. There is no conflict, I'm waiting for a shoe to drop in chapter two.
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