All Comments on 'Deceived by a Mother and Daughter'

I give it a five

Nicely organized...fun to follow.

You know the joke about Minnie Mouse cheating on Mickey?

Try to remember next time not to use similar names. It can be confusing. 5 stars.

A real fun read.

I thought the secret was going to be that the mom was the one who rode him in the middle of the night? Much better than picking a stranger to be her baby daddy...

Weird! Still a fun read!

I would have changed some things. I liked the story and the ending but I personally would have added that he got them both pregnant. I just think that that would have added a bit more thrill to it and would have made the story a bit longer. Other than that, this was one of the greatest short stories I have ever read.

a pleasant reading experience that was, i will suggest however, next time, please dont use two related characters with similar names, makes it all the more confusing >_<. however, randi's personality outweighs this so good job!