All Comments on 'Deception'

Just how old do you envisige Tandie to be? She's been married to Chuck for seven years and is still in college?

Her sex life reads a bit frantic. No sex with her husband? Or have I missed something?

But I really like to read pornographic stories written by females. They ought to be able to describe their erotic ideas, adventures and desires much better than any male could do. Especially from you since you admit you love sex. Let's read the details of the pleasures from your experiences — one or more of your characters.

Only it wasn't. Pity, had the makings of a good story.

Where is the next chapter? Could have been glorious.