All Comments on 'Deciphering the Bloom Ch. 02'

Moving along nicely, and I loved the twist at the end! Excellent story :)

I love the story so far and am looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.

i liked this one more and good you didn't hurt anyone badly!

you are quite a writer and im so proud of you.

keep on doing the good job aka writing XoX

Wow, great story! First, it's so well-written. It's also such a great story. You've made us so invested in the characters. I love Breezy too. I can't believe this Jeremy and I have a feeling it is gonna get really ugly. I was shocked with the end and it was a pleasant surprise. I hope Davey can realize how much he means to Nic after that. Somehow, I bet he doesn't though. He is so damaged from his life. It is clear Nic can heal him but we just have to see how unworthy Davey feels and if he'll somehow leave Nic in a misplaced attempt to show love. I hope that doesn't happen. That was a really great story within a story when he told his story about August. I wish Nic would warn Davey about Jeremy b/c it is pretty likely Jeremy will go to Davey at some point. I look forward to the rest of the story and can certainly say it' s one of the best .

you're an amazing storyteller. I can't wait for ch 2 to see how Davey responds to Nic's confession/story

wow!! great story! how did i miss this story? i didn't even know it existed until today so will be reading the first one sometime today. i mean, i was told that you have a story out pretty soon but for some reason i didn't see it.

i hope Jeremy doesn't cause too much heartbreak between Nic & David since both have had their shares of miseries. I can't wait for the next installment!! *bouncing with excitement* LOL :)

Great work!! Cheers!! (:

even more in love now. Breezy is a keeper! and now we have another person to go down a scheming snake plus the uncle ugh!Tears over Nicolos story and deceleration. Please keep this coming!! Love, love

beautiful. I'm glad I found it. Put simply; you captured me :)

This story is sooo good. Well written, beautiful, touching, and erotic. Please continue to write more. I'm a fan :)

Thanks for reading DTB! Chapter 03 was sent to my editor 04/04. It's a busy one so BS21 is making sure the story is progressing properly. As soon as he sends it back I will make the corrections and post. Meanwhile I am working on the fourth chapter.

Loved it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

You made this chapter so intense and serious yet so full of love. It was an amazing chapter. Cheers :D

I must admit i got a little teary eyed when Nic found David in the room after his uncle attacked him. Great chapter cant wait to read the next one!

Exquisite.

I read the first chapter and forgot about it and finally have come back to it. I love these two and how you have pulled them together but Jeremy is going to be a problem a dangerous one!! I hope he doesn't hurt our Davey though or I will have to hunt him down!!!! Onto the next chapter