All Comments on 'Deckhand Adventures 01'

Loved your story please continue

Unless one or both are going to slip into some lingerie for more fun, then I think this story is in the wrong category. Good though it is.

Please continue. I really enjoyed the suspense. Can't wait to read what happens next!

I am currently working on the next part of this story. I know I hadn't revealed too much about the inner mind of the protagonist... I wanted to focus on the experience and to beg the question "why?"

This will all be understood with the next chapter that, for the time being, I'm thinking will be a prequel/sequel to this story uncovering the hidden tendencies of the protagonist.

Thanks again for your feedback!

Nice little jaunty sea ditty.

But, who or what was the 1st person. No idea on gender however fluid it might be. Was it Erotic Coupling or Gay story or was one of them dressed as opposite gender?