All Comments on 'Decoding Desires Ch. 02'

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1moeannie1moeannieabout 3 years ago

The humor, self deprecating innocence and romance of this story kept me reading. I'm in awe of the way you build characters and scenes. Even without penetration this story is smoking hot.

LASFSEALASFSEAabout 3 years ago
Yearning

What a sublime chapter. Teasing turning into torture. Lust and sexual arousal. 2 men playing mind games and role playing to heighten the experience. PDreadful, the writing is wonderful and the characters are complex and playful with serious undertones of dominance to come soon. I love this story. BTW- Penny Dreadful was one of my favorite shows on cable with the outstanding Eva Green. Waiting patiently for chapter 03.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

somehow softcore in a good way

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

So you are punishing us your readers I see...

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I'm a scientist by day, a mom by night, and a writer by even later night (just for fun!). I appreciate feedback! I enjoy writing smut of many flavors, including gay male, fantasy/romance/smut, male/male/female, and occasionally some reluctance/taboo stuff.

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