All Comments on 'Deep Fire'

That was really hot. I hope there’ll be another chapter

Really hot! I look forward to another chapter.

Wow! Super hot (and well written!)

Yes this was very good, especially the ending. For the entire story he’s a passive weak secret sub, but then when Robert finally breeds his ass, he gets accused of being a conniving little tart who wants and could destroy Robert’s marriage, even his entire life..Brianne is nothing but a dirty whore..

JT

Super hot and a fantasy of mine…work place abuse of power.

Yes the workplace angle adds to the hotness..I’ve had relationships with men where I work and it was definitely a mistake. I totally understand that they could destroy me and at so many levels. Just thinking about it makes me unbelievably hard though. Someone who could destroy me..cumming hard in my ass..then telling me to lick it clean..And I kneel and lick..and get hard again…

Strong writing. Good development toward the boss's goal and a nice twisted--and logical--ending, if the reader wants to see where this could go.