All Comments on 'Deep in the Heart of Me Ch. 02'

from the other side.

This really is about a million different kinds of 'hot.' And I'll probably read it at least two more times before the next chapter goes up.

What can I say but wow, I love how this is adding such wonderful detail to Jarods character, I want to open both stories side by side and read them both at once! You add such a lovely tension to the whole piece, I really didn't want it to end. Thanks!

That pretty much says it all. Eagerly anticipating chapter three!

fantastic, i loved the first 2 stories, and have been watching for more for a while. will there be more chapters?

to shine like beacons in the sometimes drab world of Lit writing.

This is an amazing story. Captivating; irresistible. Your writing is pure magic. I can't wait for more! I love hearing the narrative from his side. I can't wait to discover more about what demon/sword he has at his back.

Ahhh... So it was THIS part in which Jarod replied witha "fuck." Please ignore the last part of my last comment (on Part 1).

Again, thank you so much for all of your effort constructing this story- love it.

~ LaLaLadidahgirl

And their biggest enemies to fight are themselves! Ooooooooooooh la la!

Your comment at the end of Under my Skin or before Deep in the Heart of Me, I can't remember which, was that you could read either story first.

I disagree. I think Stephanie's story needs to be read first - it's so brutal and put's Stephanie's natural response and her understanding of Jarod in place.

Deep in the Heart of Me is therefore revelatory. It's so different to what we expected. And really does make you wonder how Stephanie might feel if she ever realised what's really going on in Jarod's head.

Well, I still have more to read, so onwards....

For real. I read Under My Skin first and loved it and now I'm reading Deep and think that it adds so much more to the entire story. I agree one hundred percent with the Anonymous commenter below (3/21/14).