All Comments on 'Deep in the Heart of Me Ch. 04'

so beautifully crafted.

Just amazingly perfect. Have so enjoyed reading this story, it truly is great work. I see what you mean regarding a continuation, it would be hard when technically all is overcome. However like most people I always want to know what happened next ? Some content themselves with an epilogue, i could however see Jarod being possessive and Stephanie being quite independent, the eternal struggle of working in the same office ( Angela wouldn't be pleased) but whether that's enough.....? Thanks for writing such a great story I have re read more times than I can count! M

another amazing chapter, ive been watching out for this and it was worth the wait, it had me gripped, love the control aspects especially.

hope to read more sometime x

I'm so impressed with how different the two stories are. You gave just the ending that was needed by what was added. Simply amazing. Please continue writing; you have such a gift.

-onyx

There it is! I enjoyed how there was further development where Stephanie's story left off especially where he admits that he's in love with her! I hope he doesn't fuck it up!

This was so good. Just the right amunt of kink. Very hot. But must read other story first to get the full effect.

Just loved this story

I've read this two times already.. and i always had butterflies... it's an amazing story.. you're an amazing writer.

Please write more.. don't let this talent go to waste..

For those of you who haven't stopped by my profile, this story continues in Part 3 - 'Just the Thought of You'.

If you haven't already read Part 1 - 'Under My Skin', you might want to backtrack now and read that before you go on.

Happy reading and let me know if you enjoyed it!

Thanks

Brunne

i read dis series atleast once every week!! i cnt seem to stop myself! its heart warming and amazing. the emotions are so real and moving, i feel dem evertym.

pls dnt stop writing.pls pls i wnt more frm you!

Loved. The dual stories,