All Comments on 'Deep Space'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great start

I can't wait to see a continuation of this story. I'm enjoying the inter-personal exploration and acceptance. Will they go back to human controlled space together? Will they find a way to get back to Tyr's planet after figuring a way to re-power the ship? Please write more.

KamattlockKamattlockover 12 years ago
Very nice

Very interesting story I hope you continue it. I would love to read what happens next.

icecloudicecloudover 12 years ago
Good Start

Really good start, and I hope that you continue this into a series as there is a lot of potential here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Very nice sci-fi

A good, solid story. It has many good sci-fi conventions, except for catgirls, but that can be counted as an erotica convention. (Not THAT kind of convention, of course!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice

It was a really good story. Maybe you should post a picture of Tyr

davidofbrooklyndavidofbrooklynover 12 years ago
GOOD SCIFI

Well done, very interesting...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
time

when are you going to write a second one??

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
loved it

i loved this story,and i second writing a second part and making/posting a picture of tyr if thats possible

jpb531jpb531over 11 years ago
Great story

Loved the concept and the execution. Wouldn't mind another chapter to find out what happens to Sam and Tyr.

dliterdliteralmost 11 years ago
very good

Please publish another chapter to this story: let us know if the people are able to fix their atmosphere, what happens with Tyr and Sam. Where they go, can they travel as they might wish and wherever they want!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
very nice

It was very good indeed how for another. Chapter soon and what happens with them both

smi7zy935smi7zy935almost 11 years ago
re-very good

Damn auto correct -_-

dliterdliteralmost 11 years ago
Waiting for more!

I read this earlier this year and was hoping you would have written another chapter by now:-( I would think he would be able to move his ship closer to her planet so they could move to one of their ships and continue with their sharing of tech and other things. It would be very interesting I think.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

moree!!!!!!!!!!!!!! really good story

TJSkywindTJSkywindabout 5 years ago
Begs for another chapter

Count me impressed. I hope you consider a follow up tale of these two.

Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté

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