All Comments on 'Deepa Submits'

by sanjuagarwal2068

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Indians here need to stop embarassing the rest of us...

What is up with all this cuck shit? Embarassing emasculating nonsense.

1*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
...

Are these Indian cuck stories just a massive Pakistani psy-op? Either way, they are hilarious in a 30-layer-deep-Bing-translation of a 4Chan post, train wreckey sort of way.

D_GREAT_KNIGHTMAIRED_GREAT_KNIGHTMAIREalmost 4 years ago
What to say

It seems that English isn't your first language. May I suggest that you get a editor?!

It will help your readers to understand what you're trying to convey in your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Did you mean

Dilbert Or Dirtbag for your useless character's name, either fits.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

I've loved Padma Lakshmi, of Top Chef, for years. But after seeing all these bad Indian stories, I'm certain she is cucking her husband with Tom.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Simply awful

Another Indian author that clearly hates women. Nobody is THAT stupid. Horrible writing. Go away. Stay away.

No stars as even giving this garbage one star would be an insult to the star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Straight forward, albeit predictable, tale with undertones of the long suffering realistic wife adapting to conditions. Criticisms of style in the writings of one whose English is not the primary language are unwarranted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very nice

I an an Indian wife living in Delhi, and I fuck whoever my husband desires. It is good for his business and I love the feeling of cocks inside me. I was shy at first too. I love your submission to help your husband. I am my husbands property and he may do with me what he wants. I am very happy to fuck many men.

Blocker1Blocker1almost 4 years ago
block out the noise

dude I liked it. these idiots are english readers so they are just hating. I read hinglish and this is good shit. block out these haters and di your thing.

Pankaj02Pankaj02almost 4 years ago
Excellent Story

Please write more stories.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Not this please

Maybe you should stick to Hindi or a related vernacular dialect? Forget English, even the Hinglish is atrocious.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Very good. Like it very much: 👍👍 = ☆☆☆☆+ [4+ (4.4=88%)]. ❤ :)

Dilbag is a very very lucky guy.

Deepa is a keeper. Full stop.

She knows that there are times when

a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do!

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