by heatround
It was truly a differant way of handling this type of subject. I liked it
I'm loving the way the story is written, with action, drama, sex, and an ACTUAL plot. I really want to know what happens next so PLEASE keep this story going.
You are elloquintly descriptive in your stories love your stuff
ps please finish this story
You did this story in 2005 and have done other stories since then. You put this story as chapter 1 and have put continued at the end of it. Do you plan on more chapters? You should finish the story with a few more chapters.
Hear, Hear, Anonymous! This started as something more than 'run of the mill', so please continue it.
Enjoyed the story; it's been a while for Part II. Do we have a Part II in the works?