All Comments on 'Defiance Ch. 13'

Your back!!! Don't leave me waiting so long next time I don't want to have to go through withdrawal symptoms again.... It's agonizing

That was certainly intense and well done. I only wish it could have been longer. Gods.... more please *begs*

I loved it! and it was fast. Thank you!

Love it and really hate the prince. Would like karma to rain on Christian like a torrent

More!!!!! <0>__<0> Hate the prince he really needs to get his just deserts.

wow, that was an immense emotional roller coaster =]

And I enjoyed every minute of it.

Please finish this story as soon as possible. Im so anxious to read the ending =]

Amazing! There must be more. I need to know what happens next. Please keep writing!

As much as I hated Chirstian at first, I kind of hope he ends up at least a little happy. |:

You got me captivated from the first chapter. Amazing series, please don't stop writing!

Can't wait for the next installment!

Also, it might just be me but have you by any chance read any Robin Hobb books? Something about your writing put me in mind of the Farseer books, which you should take as a huge compliment because I'm a big fan of her work :)

I can't wait to see how it'll all turn out, and really it's time poor Tate gets his reprieve from Christian. You've created a wonderful world for your story that just drew me in and I've just GOT to know how it all ends!

I like your story but find it a bit confusing.

Tate does not seem to feel anything for any of the men who want him. Lukas who appears to be trying to 'save' him was not much better than the rest of them at the start.

That said, Tate never showed any special feeling or longing for him all through these long chapters, whether in action or in thought. I mean he hardly seems to think of Lukas at all while in Christian's clutches!

My excitement with the story line diminished considerably from then on, I must confess.

At a point I had even thought you were building up towards his love interest being Tanis but that appears to have crumbled too.

If Lukas is meant to be his love you probably should have built the emotions up a bit more over the course of the tale cos right now it doesn't seem worth it for a man to sacrifice his life and that of his family to save someone who does not love him.

It would be sad if that's what you're going for.

I hope I get my end...................I know how I want it to end