All Comments on 'Delicate Touches Pt. 02'

Well, not exactly thousands but you're building up an interesting cast of characters. I'll be interested to see what happens when they're all in the same house. Mei Lin recalling the fate of masturbators brought back memories of some of my schooling. God! the shit that we Catholics were expected to swallow, particularly way back when. Great read as ever, Shaima. Roll on Part 3.

I loved the way you wove the different characters into the story. I shall await further chapters with interest.

Another excellent chapter! Thanks for sharing this with us!

These storylines are VERY hard to follow when 3 or more people are together. The conversation gets all muddled because it's often impossible to figure out who is saying or doing something. The words "she" and "her" are too often not enough, and I had to re-read many paragraphs, trying to determine who's who or doing something to, uhhh, who is that, exactly? I'm tired of this, so I'm giving up.

Too bad though, I liked lots of what's happening here.

Actually, with each sex scene I'm turned off by the number of buttons involved :(

I like it, took a sec to see who is talking but I still enjoyed it 5