All Comments on 'Delicate Touches Pt. 03'

This is getting complex now, and Nicki is going to have to make some decisions. Some wonderfully sexy scenes,

All the time I was reading I was thinking: "Work the word 'complex' into any comment" then I see that Pixie has beaten me to it. But it is the only effective word. Right now the story is like one of those Russian dolls, one thing inside another, each popping out to surprise you. The AA meeting scene was very effective as was Mei Lin's efforts to stand up to her homophobic, control-freak mother. A very well-told chapter, exactly what I've come to expect from your tales.

I really like this story though I do have to re-read some sentences. I am not sure whom is being referred to, the person thinking or talking or the person they are with. Regardless, I'm getting through it and will be waiting for more.

Another excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one. Thank you for sharing this with us!