All Comments on 'Delicious Bet'

Very much enjoyed your story ... good theme & character mix. Look forward to reading more of your work ... keep writing!

I enjoyed your tale but, who in the heck is Veronica? You need to keep the names straight. An editor would help with that.

good story but look into getting an editor to polish up a few things other than that i really enjoyed it :)

loved reading it

was well thought out

and good fun to read.