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DragonCoboltDragonCoboltover 4 years agoAuthor
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ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeover 4 years ago

Good chapter. The juvenile dragon's juvenile antics are especially entertaining. Also, you hit some really powerful sentimental high notes at the end of the chapter. The divergent plot lines are distracting, but I assume you'll bring it all together at some point.

MelanPoncaMelanPoncaover 4 years ago
This magic stuff...

Well, it can really change your view of the world! I've been following this tale of yours since you started it and I am rather hooked. As crazy as he sounds, I rather like Dale. Dragons in the world seems like an awesome addition to life as we know it, and, if the planet (Stark or Acadia) gets more women like Helen...like I said about the dragons.

Maybe the librarian could interbreed with something a touch hmm, cuter, that would also make the spread of mind-reading a bunch more appealing. So mind reading dragons with uber-beautiful human aspects (who want to repopulate the planet with smart, mind-reading beautiful dragon spawn)...

I think I'll just wait to see what YOU do with it! Keep up the great work!

Mel

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