by meerkatchild
...but if you're going to switch between Laura and Sam's point of view, it needs to be clearer. I though you'd just goofed and decided to change Sam's name to Laura after the first couple of paragraphs. Adding in a scene break (like a couple of asterisks) would help.
I can't believe you did a Supernatural thing. I highly encourage you to write more. Maybe Soulless Sam?
It needs to be longer and more involved. Felt rushed, but other than that good.
That you brought in a Supernatural story, Im a big Dean fan, I wish it was longer though! But very good!
There is so much possibility with Supernatural. You have no idea how excited I was to see this. Always wanted to be taken by Dean. Or Sam...or both lol.
Anything with Sam and Dean gets my vote! :D