All Comments on 'Demon Dean'

by meerkatchild

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radiodemonradiodemonover 8 years ago
Not bad...

...but if you're going to switch between Laura and Sam's point of view, it needs to be clearer. I though you'd just goofed and decided to change Sam's name to Laura after the first couple of paragraphs. Adding in a scene break (like a couple of asterisks) would help.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Holy shit

I can't believe you did a Supernatural thing. I highly encourage you to write more. Maybe Soulless Sam?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Next time

It needs to be longer and more involved. Felt rushed, but other than that good.

MidianCastielMidianCastielover 8 years ago
I love..

That you brought in a Supernatural story, Im a big Dean fan, I wish it was longer though! But very good!

jadewinchesterjadewinchesterover 8 years ago
Hell yes

There is so much possibility with Supernatural. You have no idea how excited I was to see this. Always wanted to be taken by Dean. Or Sam...or both lol.

SubmissiveAudreySubmissiveAudreyabout 7 years ago
Gotta love Supernatural ;)

Anything with Sam and Dean gets my vote! :D

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