All Comments on 'Demon Prince of Mangala Ch. 04'

by TheWitcher

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
Really good

I'd like to see more of nat.its a great story.u don't have to have sex in every chapters,then u end up ruining it.less sex more loving.then when he does have nat,the sex part will be excellent but don't go over the top.

kiwiplumkiwiplumabout 14 years ago
better

This story keeps getting better and better I think, certainly interesting and not predictable, well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Overusing "cunt"

There are these cool things called synonyms. Plus, cunt is a harsh, vulgar, sexual word. Not appropriate in all places. Girls like Natasha really wouldnt be using it.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous