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"I won't go down without making you feel good," she whispered, iron in her tone despite the softness of her voice. Her movements were slow, and far from steady, as she pushed against the mattress to move downward. Still, the determination I was coming to associate with her served her well, fueling the movement of her muscles as she slowly lowered her head down between my thighs. Her tongue darted out to touch my legs, and I saw the flicker of surprise as she discovered what I knew she would - that I was sopping wet. Needy. That bringing her such pleasure, combined with her teasing of my flesh, had already pushed me close to her own state.
Perhaps that discovery was energizing, for the swiftness with which she attacked me with her tongue belayed the tired, awkward movements that had characterized her initial descent. Where before two arms had barely kept her up, now one arm was all that kept her from falling flat upon the bed. The other hand moved to join her mouth, her finger teasing my clit from its hood even as her tongue went to work upon my slit.
Heat rose within me, as warm liquid all but gushed out of me, and her finger swiftly found its place inside me, pumping in and out between swipes of her tongue. What had already been a raging fire was quickly turned into an irresistible inferno, heat and pressure building to a crescendo inside of me before, at last, gushing out in release.
Lucy sealed her lips upon my sex, sucking, and licking, and drinking from me, sustaining the waves of pleasure for as long as she could. Then, once the pleasure had become nothing but a pleasant memory, she forced herself onto her hands and knees again. Crawling up the bed, she used the last of her energy to position herself before collapsing, her head upon my chest, one arm curling about my waist, and a leg crossed against my thighs.
That was the night I learned that Lucy snored. Cutely.
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Author's Notes:
And so ends volume 2 of Demon Queened! More or less. There's two epilogue chapters left, before volume 3 starts, but other than that...
It was a short volume, and it's pretty much entirely devoted to setting things up for volume 3, but I hope you enjoyed it. I'll be doing everything in my power to make the payoff in volume 3 worth it.
I'm really curious what everyone thinks about Lucy's big speech. It's something I've been planning for a long time, and it's more or less my answer to the "Liar Revealed" trope. It's the closest I could come to giving Devilla and Lucy a solid foundation to build their relationship upon. As for how it'll affect Lucy's reaction to the truth, in the end... Well, even I'm not entirely sure as to the particulars, just yet. I guess I'll just have to keep writing, so we can all find out~!
Beyond that, I gotta say that there's something fitting about the big finale happening in chapter 21. The number is actually somewhat significant in Demon Queened, after all! It's the youngest age a Demon Queen can be crowned at, and the age Lucy was in the game when she raided the tower. Neither of which is super significant, but there's enough weight behind the number to make me happy. Especially since I wasn't actually aiming for a confluence of numbers, or anything. It just sort of worked out that way.
Finally, I want to give a quick thanks to my proofreader, FallingLeaf, and my beta reader, Lulla. The former went over everything but the sex scene - any mistakes you see there are entirely on me. I don't know about you, but it makes me appreciate all the work they do even more...
PS: Putting this chapter in the Lesbian Sex category, where the story first started, both for the sake of those who never caught the move, and because... Well. It has actual sex!
Also, Chapter 22 returns us to 2k chapters. I think that's going to be the norm going forward, but I won't rule out the occasional monster like this.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoI think its cute you think of three pages as a monster. The longer the chapters, lets one sink into the story more I think. More time to imagine the world, characters, situations, etc. To forget this world and be in that one for as long as possible.
Devilla may want to think about what is produced in the tower that could be desired and traded for out in the world. She knows the things the tower lacks and would love to have. Introducing both sides to new things and things already considered rare could be a job. Distrust of the new will have to be overcome. Then, if they are truly liked, the appeal will grow. Others will take the crops and spices creating new foods and flavors with them. New tools could inspire new ways of doing things.
Eventually though, both side's curiosity won't settle for not knowing the source(s) of their newfound prizes. That would be when Devilla will either reveal herself or be discovered by Lucy and the humans or the tower will learn where she goes and what's she's been up to and either a revolt or power struggle will start or be happy thinking she's concocted a devious plan to defeat Heroine and take over the world. Probably a mixture of all the possibilities simultaneously. Sorry, I always try to think down paths and wonder what could happen.
