All Comments on 'Demons in Edinburgh'

I like it! I really like this and can't wait to read more. Moarrr I say. Moar!!! :)

I had a different ending idea which I'd be curious if people prefer--let me know here!

Alternate ending: She watches her friends having sex, then slips and falls (need a believable reason why) Then she sees the bucket with blood, and all the mayhem and sex ensues. When she wakes up in the bed, she is surprised to discover in her conversation that it was a dream since she fell and hit her head. Less horror, more "it was all a dream" spin to it, which would give a little more moral leeway to the nonconsent sex.

i expected more after readind anthony and eva

but the ending was plain trash

even in fantasies dry anal would hurt she had done nothing wrong

unlike eva she forgave him too easily