All Comments on 'Demystifying Boys'

....think of how well that could work!!!!!

Decent set-up with many interesting possibilities and you just let it go limp. This was a waste of my time and yours.

Started off promising then it started to get going . It then totally lost the plot. Have another try put some more body into the story.

I really liked the beginning of this story, it created a lot of anticipation for something big but I just didn't feel satisfied with the ending. It would be great if you could expand the story a bit: young schoolgirls, wide-eyed and very innocent led by their female teacher in lessons where they are exploring the bodies of attractive young male props.