by onejustforfun
Your young men made huge advances in two years. I think you might have filled in the blanks with a few additional chapters. I wish you success with your future stories.
This is a first rate piece, nothing really fictional about this comes through. Although it is very difficult for couples to come out in public, in the long run, it is the only way. Polonius's line: To thine own self be true, means among other things, live your own life, not someone else's. Conformity means living someone else's life, we need to live on this planet, no merely visit it. That said, it depends on where one lives, there are places that are extremely dangerous for young gay men to live openly. One needs to know these places, there is no reason to put oneself or one's partner in harms way.