All Comments on 'Denial dies at Valentine's'

5*Stars. Really well done. Funny, hot and romantic all rolled into one!

Good premise.

But seems to be in a rush to get to the end.

You wrote: "Pete took his time, enjoying me as much as I was enjoying him, taking direction eagerly as I moaned and begged and pleaded." Not erotic.

Needed to hear her enjoying what he was doing.

Needed to hear her "directions".

Needed to hear him asking her if he was doing it right, asking for more directions/instructions.

Needed involvement of other body parts. Supposedly her "girls" were magnificent. That's it with them?

And not even a little touching of the butt plug in her ass?

And why wouldn't she make an effort to play with his cock and balls -- both for his enjoyment and hers. Some teasing would have been in order.

Etc.

Three stars.

Excellent, anybody who thinks otherwise can write their own and see how they go, thanks

Great story. Short and sweet. Excellent balance of romance and hot action. The first of yours I've read but it won't be the last. Keep up the good work!