All Comments on 'Density and Singularities'

by brandy25

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soft_butchsoft_butchabout 15 years ago
Absolutely Incredible!

I absolutely love this story. It was sexy, funny, and HOT! You are one incredible writer! I love the how you added details like the equation. GREAT JOB! I can't wait for another one of your stories!

LzBnLvrLzBnLvrabout 15 years ago
Amazing!

Educated and sexy! Never a better combination in my opinion! I adore this story, I LOVE THE DOG! Why are you on this site? You should be publishing these somewhere and making $$$$$$$$$! Love it! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
This is very good,

witty and sexy. I even enjoyed your blip on pg 2. I think condesencion rauher than condensation, although the latter is quite an amusing image in the circvmstances. Thanks again for another fine story. -- UK CYNIC

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
It was great!

Even if she put a mouse, instead of mousse in her hair, and a few other minor mistakes, the writing caused me to keep on reading instead of pausing at the "speed bump", it was so good. Very nice, ma'am, and thank you for an excellent read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good, but ...

Anal ruins an otherwise good romance.

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