by steve350
More extreme than I would normally write but well written and flowed on well from your part 1. Good to see also that you didn't try and sneak it into "Loving Wives" section. This was the correct one. Will probably kill poor old Ralph when he sees it but what a way to go! He isn't exactly thriving is he? Waiting for the next chapter. Cheers.
Absolutely excellent - would love to see it continued although not sure where it would go...