by missmetalhead
Wow. First time I've read something here and had the crap scared out of me :-) Excellent start. Looking forward to reading more.
Kept my attention all the way through and I wanted more. Great work. Keep it going!
You held my attention all the way. Thank you for the entertainment, I can't wait for the next installment.
Well written, very engaging, and not what I was expecting at all. The scenario and the universe was vivid and well presented, and I really look forward to seeing what happens next.