by Bluepen451
Great writing but I was a little let down to have Alice take control like that. Not because her “shameless slut” display wasn’t hot, it was, but Herve’ was built up to be the seducer and ‘hot Joan’ there to help him ravish her. So I was hoping for more descriptive words there and more taking turns. I sort of expected one of woman to lick a freshly fucked pussy (Joan seems more submissive). That said, I really enjoy your writing. Thank You