All Comments on 'Describing Beauty'

by Lady_Silver

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Gentle and Wonderfully told!

This story is the epitome of what a love should be between a husband and wife. So sensually satisfying, as they move through the age-old sexual dance - it's delightful to read about. Terrific Write!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Wow!

Wow, How fine! A great short read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Mmmm

Very hot and beautifully written.

S-DesS-Desover 17 years ago
Your Story

Has been mentioned on the New Story Reviews thread on the Author's Hangout.

PEATBOGPEATBOGover 17 years ago
A powerful declaration of love!!!

Lady Silver, I love your excellent style of writing and grasp of the English language. This story clearly shows how love should be between husband and wife. Having lived my life for the last 40 years with that kind of love, I can say that you write with a wisdom born of experience. Yes beauty, like true love, is "a spirit that mocks the weakness of the body and laughs at that which doesn't matter".

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